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You wrote that Sakura was going to be one of the girls, but I don't see Shikamaru doing that because of Naruto. Naruto is his closest friend after Chouji, and with Naruto's love for Sakura, Shikamaru wouldn't betray his friendships for some ass. I would suggest you replace Sakura with Yugao Uzuki, the ANBU who was in love with Hayate Gekko. He could test the hypnosis on an ANBU and she gets to let go of her stiffness. It's a win-win.

I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

Hmmmmm, I like where this is going. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out. One question though, if hypnosis isn't considered a technique (which is what "jutsu" means in japanese too) why does it require chakra control.

UPDATE P{LEASE

So.., as Shika/Anko pairing, now that`s something you don`t get everyday. On the other hand Shikamare could now plow through Konoha`s females (aand a dertain Suna nin) and effortlessy ask them how they feel about himm, hehe This story so far shows great promise, as the idea of the story is a completly new quirk, so keep it up and please update as soon as possible, especially with those cliffhangers of yours

Alrighty! It's about time we saw this one alive and kicking again! I've been waiting ever since I first saw this one for the fifth chapter to come out. I'm sure it'll be good. Keep on trucking!

I love how the story is going so far, and I can't wait for more to come. I think things are getting really intresting in the story as well, so keep up the good work.

So far this is a rather promising tale. A downpoint I would make is perhaps lingering too long on things that don't matter too greatly to the plot...hah, though I gues most people here aren't reading this for the plot, neh?

At any rate, don't grow too bored of the story yet, at least do the other chapter. I look forward to it.

Did Tsunade (&maybe Shizune) somehow get brainwashed/MCed?

Well looks interesting so far. For Shikamaru, I say give him Temari, Ino, or Sakura as his girl.

Now I'm going to take a guess and say Genkaku knows how to hypnotize people, and that Shikamaru may learn it.
Some suggested targets for Shikamaru to practice with first would be both Naruto and Hinata (for Naruto it's
being over Sakura and taking his blinders off on others feelings, and Hinata is the confidence bit and her
nervous habits). The reason I suggested them and those particular suggestions, is because I like NaruHina as a
pairing (sorry I can't see Hinata with anyone else willingly, and she is the best one for Naruto once he opens
his eyes, since he would listen to her).

Anyways keep up the good work.