rate_review Reviews

great story so far plez continue

I like your story, though to be honest, I would leave the flashbacks out... its just way to confusing in comparison to the rest of the story and I like where the story is going according to chapter 3... so I look forward to where your going with that. Also just curious, but will their be hints of something between the Yondaime and Fujaku? somehow I have a feeling their might be, but maybe thats just me *laughs* anyways looking forward to ch 4

your story just keeps getting better & better

yo

yeah started the review and then my laptop when all haywhire on me so have to start again, it is less than 10 min until class starts so i have to cut this one short sorry. i know i could do this later but then i might forget.

way to go on the story, it is really well written and one get caught in the flow as one reads. keep it coming oh yeah could u email me the italic thing to? cant remember who it was that mentioned something about it but since it doesnt take word it would be nice to know if one could get italic here. hehe

well better go so i'll see you around for the next chapter urs or min ;D

hugs snoopy

Hello there! I think this story is awsome. oh and if you want bold and Italic it goes like this. lesser than sign i (for italics) or b (for bold) u (underline) greater than sign. at the end of repeat that but put a / in front of the letter. that will close the comand to put the words in italics/bold/underline. I would show you but it would mess this review up...sorry. I'll send it in an email if you wish. I hope that helps. it all should look like this (i)words(/i) (only with the lesser than greater than signs) Ja!

This is a great story, but should chapter 3 really be so short?

I look forward to the next update.

thankyou for dedicating chaptor2 to me:)
and im sure when people read this fanfic
your'll have out pouring of Squealing fan-girls/boys reviewing
hehehe............evil laughter..hehehee

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

First time im reading this and it sounds pretty good so far. I like your wording and though the chaps seem short i like the premise so far. Also the summary intrigued me. Update soon.

Its Ok But You Should Redo The Chapters To Maybe Space Them Better, And Make Each Chapter Long.
But Don't Worry Its Not A Flame Review Because I Really Like The Plot I Just Thing The Story Needs A Little Work.