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for Strawberries

by elaynabrooks

person Valiant
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
w00t lemon!! I really liked this story but you're a great fanfiction writer! ^-^ Lol. I would like to see this turn into a story. It has a great plot so do it!
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New Story! Is this going to be a One-shot, or a long story like your 'Mercury and Jade' Fic?

Either way, I'm sure it'll be nice.

OK, time to get to the reading...
person MPlantz
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LoL piglet love it yea
person katsuyo
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... that was pretty entertaining... it makes me want to finish my own Shino/Sakura goodness.
One small bit of criticism though... you have it currently written that Shino and Sakura are in an uncompromising position - which isn't true since they have just finished making sweet lurv.
You may want to correct that.

- katsuyo
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story was sooooooooooooooo good. i love ADD authors they have so much personality ^_^ yaaaay! it would be great if you made a sequel so that this humble (who am i kidding?) this PERVERTED fangirl may bask in your glory!