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Oh my gosh!!!!!!!! You made me cry, I so wanted things to work out, somehow...I would do what Shino did, I would forgive but never forget, and I would never go back to a cheater!!! Boo Hoo! Please do another one, I love your stories, Shino/Kiba Kiba/Shino you are a great writer! *Runs to comment on Lj*

I've now read your entire Kiba/Shino series and I will say I'm quite surprised at this ending!!
I sooooo looked foreward to them to be happy together again. But then again, it does make sense in a way that they aren't...
I just hope you are going to continue this further! I'm so curious as to what is going to happen next.
Very well written, by the way. You have a very nice style of writing. I like it. So now I'm off to read some other works from you.
- China Dolly

Darn.. This almost made me cry.. Love your stories btw.. ^^

it's a good story, sad as hell, but good.

I'm glad you didn't try to "make everything all right" in the end. Marriage is a cage, some people can not survive in it, no matter how much they love their "mate". In honesty if you stay true to the characters, like you have done so well, it could never work. Beautiful touching story. Thank you for posting it.

Hello! I just read all your Shino/Kiba stories, and though I normally shy away from sad endings, I really liked the whole series! It was very well written, great character development, and amazing sex scenes. You really are an amazing writer.

I'm sorry to say I'm not going to be listing all my favorite parts, cause truthfully, there's too many of them. So I will only say, I loved it. All of it. And I won't beg for you to continue the series because I noticed that at the end of 'To Hold' you wrote "The End" and duh, I realize you didn't add that any of the other parts.

So...Even though it's sad that Shino and Kiba won't be reunited, I accept it. Cause Kiba cheated, and I NEVER accept cheating. Maybe like a one-time thing during drunkeness, where the cheater runs to their partner right after, admitting his sin and begging forgiveness and dying a little on the inside. But the cheat-ee can only take them back if the cheater is sufficiently punished.

Anyway, thank you for the wonderful story and all the others (of which I've read several) you wrote. Keep up the fantastic writing!

This just breaks my heart. I've read it twice now, and the heartache doesn't lessen. That's a sign of compelling writing. : )

I do hope it continues. This series is the only Shino/Kiba I've ever read (and probably ever will). Honestly, before I read your stories I'd never thought about them together... Anyway, amazing work. It's rare when fanfiction can merit this much emotion. Thanks!

Okay so today I read every single story in this series. I have to say... it's amazing. I had already read mark a long time ago on media miner, so I was intrigued. Once I started I couldn't stop. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

I'm in tears and must ask, is this their ending?

I was not expecting that.

I was in tears by the end of it, that was a really sad ending. Poor Shino! Although I can't exactly say the same for Kiba (no matter how much I love the guy). Please tell me this isn't the end! I have to have more! I have to know what happens!

And as always, this was very well written. Kept my attention glued to the computer screen the entire time.

Awaiting for more of your work, and hoping that this isn't the end,

~PenPal