rate_review Reviews

So sad. So wonderfully written!! Please let there be more to their story.

I'm beside myself... This is my absolute favorite fanfiction series ever (and most of my other favorites are either your stories or stories by Meleth, Veletlunas, or HeyDiddleDiddle from your Hidden Village archive). I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw there was *new* jbmcdragon.

Yes, this was incredibly sad- but this chapter *so* had to happen. I really don't see how anything else could possibly have happened next. This was so beautifully written- thank you for taking the time- and I'll keep my fingers crossed that more is coming. (oh- and I forgive Kiba... poor, trapped feeling Kiba...)

WHAT???? NO!!! NO Nonononononononono! HOw can u end it right there! I was so in love with this whole line of stories with this couple and now I want to go cry! PLEASE tell me ur doing another one and it wont end here! And sadly I must admit it was verry well writen...... I errr u.... and love u all the same....errrr

WHAT?!? That can't be the end of this awesome series... *Crying* This whole series was very well written; I read it from start to, I pray not completely, finish. You portrayed the personalities well, and I really enjoyed it. I was wondering about other characters' standpoints on this situation though- mainly Kiba's mom's. Any chance of there being a sequel someday? Or more fiction in general? I'll have to check in again to see if you have 'cause you write the best Shino/Kiba and Kakashi/Iruka fics!

I've never reviewed a fic on this site but since I'm continually blown away with your work I couldn't help it. Haha. God I felt like I was experiencing the emotions of the characters themselves and ended up crying. That was realy difficult and painful to read. I'm sure everyone will be bugging you to continue and put them back together, which I have to admit I agree. Unfortunately it's your story and will go in the direction you take it. In which case I'd end up filling it under "Amazing but can't re-read last installation if not entire fic due to depression causing content" haha. My hat's been off to you ever since I read the Kakashi Mission which I still rave about to my friend for having the best characterization of Kakashi. Essentialy, you have amazing talent and loathe as I am to admit it since I'm way depressed and a romantic at heart To Hold was very well written.

A:I love your stories. I've been hooked since I read the first piece of this series.
B:Awww, poor Shino. :(
C:Awww, poor Kiba. :(

D:I hope you aren't planning on leaving it at that. I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Please?

OMG I almost cried. This was so sad but so well written and so so...real. I mean really you can love someone and all but when they betray you like that u can still love them and not be able to put your trust in them anymore. I love how realistic you made this instead of the usual senthetic happy ending ya know? Well keep up the good work and update soon.

-sniffle-

-sob-

-Burst out crying!-

ToT

Even though this story made me bawl my eyes out please do not tell me that this kiba/shino series is over now. I would really like for them to get back together despite everything kiba has put shino through.

OH MY GODS HOW COULD YOU?! You have to make it better! I'll never forgive you if you don't! (And of course even something as sad as this was perfect!)