rate_review Reviews

Oh my god.
Such pain, angst, violence and sheer emotion.
I love it, it was all true brilliance, you really captured aal the characters you used.
Please update soon!

Sincerely,
Orgy-of-Death.

First of all, your use of descriptive language is fantastic. That dream sequence you did was chilling.

Personally, I don't care for stories where Naruto is all tormented and angsty inside. It's just so OOC for him. Also, I think Naruto is at a point in his ninja career where he could easily defend himself against a couple of guys in an ally without bringing out his demon. Thank you though, for not making this one of those horrible stories where Naruto gets raped by some random group of angry citizens. (I hate those stories!)

A question: why didn't Kyuubi just heal Naruto's injuries like he usually does?

Noooooo! Angst, angst, angstttttt... Good writing, but a little confusing with the switching and all...

Poor Naruto!! He needs help! I like this story so far! :)

This is great! I know you said it would be awhile, but you kind of kept us hanging here. The only suggestion is to please make it more clear whose head we're in. At the beginning you switch between S and N with no warning.
Thanks
Slave