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for Lone Ninja

by pezcado

person tillean
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story has allot of potential and I hope you decide to continue it. We both know there isn't even nearly enough kakasaku in the world!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, very good so far, I really like it and I hope you actaully continue this. So far the only continous fic I read is perception but i would def. read yours. Jo
person A.J.
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intriguing beginning, I can't wait to read more!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has so much promise. =) I'm really looking forward to it, so thanks for posting it. I noticed a few simple errors, and I saw that you said you needed a beta. I am way too busy, but I have free time Monday, so I might (might) send you a cleaned up prologue. Alright... =) Thanks! I'll anxiously await the first chapter.