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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
do hope you have chapter 3 ready for reading soon =)
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol 1st chappy was evil...in a very wicked and hot way. awesome job!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow chappy 2 was pretty hot.
hmm.. i think that sasuke and kakashi should do that bell test again, but everytime sasuke gets close he should flick on the butt plugg. or if kakashi could turn it on and off randomly and see if sasuke can keep quiet while still trying to stalk after the beel on kakashi's belt. dont know if my ideas helped inspire you any but plz update as soon as possible.
hmm.. i think that sasuke and kakashi should do that bell test again, but everytime sasuke gets close he should flick on the butt plugg. or if kakashi could turn it on and off randomly and see if sasuke can keep quiet while still trying to stalk after the beel on kakashi's belt. dont know if my ideas helped inspire you any but plz update as soon as possible.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet!!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOA1 Way cool, details are good.Itachi being involved someway is good(forces them into something....).Yeah,slow down and go into detail, its kinda fast but the idea is a monster.Your writing is fine too so thats no problem, just, put youeself in their shoes and trry detail.Just a seggestion (sp), ya know?
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more hope to see you update soon
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I like your writing style and your take on Kakashi's character. Hope to see more soon!
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was amazing to read please please please please please update soon. I dont have any advice im uncreative but I admire you for your amazingnesss please keep writting and updateing please!!!! soon too OMG I loved reading that THANX FOR UPLOADING!!!!~
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! very intersting indeed. HA! intruments of torture is always the way to go. Keep up the good work!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story ;) Please update soon - and maybe a bit more detail too, lol ;)