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for simple wish

by crazyredhead

person jgoodman
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this story please update soon
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It's great. I vote you put GaaraHarry (if you do you should make Harry a bit more feminine, SasukeSakura, NarutoHinata. Anyway...great job on the story. Also, for team seven, sense Harry's an extra you should just add him to team seven. TTFN!
person Lizz
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good i hope you update soon
person silver
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the Cloud village angle. Harry shouldn't go back to the wizarding world though. There are too many fics like that. If I was a ninja first then everything (any abilities like magic) would be seen as a way to make me a better ninja first. I vote for a Harry/Sasuke pairing.
person Shadi88
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I thought your story was good. On Harry being a demon I say "No". What demons I like well I like kitsunes and dragons, snakes are good just about any animal can work if you do it right, but if you do decide on demons could you please do a dragon, thank you. I don't like too well that the Naruto gang will be having magic like Harry's because techniclly they already have magic of their own that's just diffrent. It's also limiting them to doing much less than they are capable of doing. On the Sakura and Sasuke I say yes not a problem there. I hope you will be doing the Naruto and Susuke rivalry I do enjoy it because behind it there is actully a very strong friendship that will last forever. Good luck, best wishes and happy holidays, & have a happy new year.
Butterfly Beauty
person Shadi88
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi again hope your doing good. Me I'm fine not bad on the second chapter I like where your taking the story and hope that the seal your planning to give Harry is a dragon seal, please make it a dragon. With the subject of Harry's prefrince (sp) I know its misspelled I'm a little tierd, well anyways yeah bi ok and if you really want a Harry/Draco that's fine with me but while he expiriments I would like to see Harry date Hinata a few times with Naruto realizing he likes her and ends up being with her. Plus some of the things that um reflectionsofreality said if I wrote it correctly said were things I agree with not everything but a lot.
Well later good luck and best wishes.
Butterfly Beauty
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I can't wait for the next update. I can't wait to see how Naruto does on the the test and also see what happens next. When is Itachi going to kill his family? if he does. Keep up the good work and update again soon!! :)
person oohshiny
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know you havent updted in awhile, but i encourage you to update as soon as possible, i would like to see harry & naru-chan interact XD i wonder how theyd like each other? my email is deannathx@comcast.net, email me when you update plz ^^
person Rymika
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope it's not to late to vote but I would like it if bouth Sasuke and Sakura went to Hogwarts with Harry and Naruto! ^_^ Hpoe you update soon!
person Twig4
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz no bi harry make harry date ino,herm, and tenten and kurenia and naruto date temari,luna,ginny and anko plz respond