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Really very satisfying madness and heat and passion and angst and all sorts of good.

I thought the story was a bit all over the place, but at the same time, I wouldnt like no other way. good job and please update soon. ^___^

I really love the way you, write, I'm so jealous XD XD I read up to chapter--I think it was 11?-- on ff.net and absolutely loved it so much I recommended it to everyone that enjoyed the SasuNaru pairing who could appreciate such awesome writing skills! I've been meaning to review for the longest time, but I'm so busy on my series, The Dark Fire Clan, I haven't had the time to review any stories I've liked. Babble, babble, look at me go, but I really enjoy this story! Please continue to bring on the best story I've ever read (whenever I get the time XD)

Lots of love and support,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA Taiyo-chan)

Wow, so much to take in all at once! It didn't take long for Naruto to start having interesting dreams, even if they do end badly. Can't wait to see more into Sasuke's head to see what he's thinking and why. Also am wondering what really happened to him!!

Wonderful chapter!!!

Oooooo - a mystery, I love mysteries. And hate them, I wanna know what happens..... I'm very excited about this chapter and really looking forward to the next. Is Sasuke really dead??? What happened to him, and when will Naruto dump that stupid Saskura's ass and jump into bed with Sasuke?

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Sasuke definitely knows how to make an entrance, doesn't he?? :D Again another wonderful chapter with everyone exactly IC. It is easy to see everyone falling into their roles! I can't wait until you post more! /hugs

I'm glad to see you posting your story here! I'm not completely caught up on it yet, but I hope to soon remedy that, lol. I just wanted to say, after rereading these two chapters, that I really love the way the story flows. I love how you write Naruto, he is still as adorable as he was as a child, yet you can feel the underlying power within him. His, Kiba's and Shika's interactions are priceless.

I also really like how you portrayed his body moving and doing even while his mind is somewhere else totally; the scene where he first found Sasuke and when Sasuke woke up in the hospital, both were very powerful scenes.

Love the story very much!!

/hugs
Z

WOW! Your writing style is just wonderful. Very nice work- this story seems like it's got one helluva awesome plot! Excitement~~~~

Going to read the next chapter~

Wow - that sums up my reaction. This is fantastic. You have an awesome first two chapters and if its continues as good as it has been so far this will fast become one of my favourite SasuNaru fics. Can't wait to read some more.