rate_review Reviews

*blushes and fans self* that was very...very hot! I loved this story, plain and simple. The fact that kyuubi was right there under the surface made it even hotter. I can so see that demon trying to find a way to 'pup' his sexy lil sensei *giggles*

Great job!

This fic was really good! I never thought I'd like Iruka/Naruto but you proved me wrong. There was relationship was very sweet yet sexy at the same time. Kudos ^_^

Quite a nice story. Strange seeing Kakashi as the bad guy, though.
There are a few slight grammar and spelling mistakes.. but that's okay. Those can be corrected easily.
The only thing that bothered me, really... is in the fifth chapter you putting "k9's" instead of canines.
Other than that, you had a very nice story. A bit short, but that's alright.

I was really digging the fic until the whole "Kakashi-tries-to-rape-Iruka" thing. Iruka might have been Naruto's most precious person, but Kakashi played a big role in his life and his training. Naruto looked up to Kakashi a lot, so he would be devastated if he ever caught Kakashi trying to do something like that. It would crush him. The way you portrayed it, Naruto nonchalantly brushed aside every aspect of the relationship that he had with Kakashi frivolously. Instantly, Kakashi was evil and evil only.

I think if you would have taken the time to dig a little deeper with the emotions Naruto would have been feeling, it might have helped. Naruto seemed very superficial because of how he reacted, and Naruto is anything but superficial. Naruto's friends mean the world to him, and that means Kakashi too. It wasn't even what Kakashi did that was the problem (he was a bit OOC, but he's a screwed up guy, ex-ANBU, it might happen if your story has a dark take on him).

It is so rare to find Naruto and Iruka stories, so I am glad that you are writing this. I guess what I'm asking is that you take your time, maybe slow down a bit, and develop the situation and inner feelings a little bit better. ^__^ Thanks.

Wow, I LIKE a protective possessive Naruto! Not many yaoi stories put Naruto in that character, actually I think this is the first one I've found. I really like what I've read!

It was probably a good thing to let Iruka figure it out on his own without pushing him. It was nice of Naruto to give Iruka enough time to figure out his feelings for him. I am a little shocked though, he seemed to forwardly aggressive before. I will be looking forward to reading more!

haha, its like passing notes in class. ^^

i hope Iruka took Tsunande's advice and stocked up on some lube. ;)

update

OH WOW, I LOVE this story so far, I can't wait to see more of this, it is GREAT!! But isn't what Naruto said a bit too close to what Kakashi said??? Maybe he's gonna freak Iruka out...but then again I mean Iruka does know Iruka ALOT better than Kakashi does...

THANKS:D

Oh you have to update this. I didn't even think about this pairing as good until I saw this. I brushed off one story I read but saw this one. I'm loving how it's going and I'm happy Kakashi is getting some help. You have to know something is wrong when you call someone 'Prey'.

AliaD

Update REALLY REALLY soon.