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for Affairs of the Pack

by Kipling

schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come on, you can`t leave such an excellent story to go down the drain. This story shows all the makings of a really good fic. So please update, as the general idea behind your story is very original especially how you displayed the Inuzukas.And leaving such a great story a cliffhanger is really incredibly mean, so please update soon. I`d really like to read further chapters.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Very great story, I love Kiba when he acts like an alpha male. I hope there will be another update.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good once more. I can only wonder what their reaction will be. Keep it coming.
person Jin
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an evil cliffy! Update soon! I can't take the suspense!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow OoO but wait does their mom know because she is kinda scary
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Inuzukacest...cudos.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind the titles' similarities; you can keep it, since it's actually a good title. And thanks for the compliments on my fic. Yeah, I love the Inuzuka; they're so cool but underappreciated and only Kiba gets screen time.

Anyhow, good update. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it coming.
person Jin
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved the "action." Very hot.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We need more of this. Inuzuka incest is just too damn hot. Please write more soon. Hana in heat is just too fucking hot.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I can't recall if you checked out my Inuzuka fic, All in the Pack; it's more story than sex fic, but sex will be a lot of the story regardless. Anyway, keep it coming.