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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, even with the "sad" ending... life is like that, things don't always work out even if you love them... it's perfect the way it is.
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi.....
ARE U SERIOS?? NO GET BAK TAGETHER??
i feel sad for kakashi but screw him
good story but needs a better ending..... make it dramticXD
like KAKASHI THEN KILLED HIMSLEF!! or somin XD gj i hope u maeks more
ARE U SERIOS?? NO GET BAK TAGETHER??
i feel sad for kakashi but screw him
good story but needs a better ending..... make it dramticXD
like KAKASHI THEN KILLED HIMSLEF!! or somin XD gj i hope u maeks more
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was just depressing. Not to be mean or anything, but if I were Iruka, I'd have found my balls enough to give it a second chance. Knowing that I could never love another person like I loved Kakashi would make me want to take him back. It's better to have loved and lost and all that. I could never be happy settling for someone that I may care about but don't really love. On a technical note though, your writing is beautifully done. I just really don't like the ending. Sorry.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was sort of depressing but as much as I hoped for them together at the ending, I felt proud that iruka didn't take him back because at the end of the day, Kakashi hurt him pretty bad - and then suddenly when Iruka was finally starting to move on - that was the time he chose to confess *sigh* I don't think I'd have taken him back either. Nice. Thanks ^_^
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it. iruka was right not to take him back. even if i love them together. i wish though that this was more then a oneshot. and it could continue being sad till a happy ending. maybe in the future like iruka said they will get back together.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww I thank you all for the kind reviews and I am glad most of you liked it, and to Waru, sorry this was not your cup of tea or to your liking...dont mind critism but it would of been nice if you also incluced something constructive or at least a reason why you didnt like it, but thank you anyway...to all the people who did like it I thank you and as I foresee it there will not be anymore added to this fic, I appolize, but if ever I get a bug to do an epi I shall do so, thank you all again, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was a nice ending. I really agree w/ Iruka. Kakashi deserved it. I would love a sequel to this story but if there's not one its still a great story. Not all story have a happy ending.