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NOOOooooo! There has to be more! Please continue this! I wish I could spend more time to say everything I want to say about this story but I've procrastinated enough. But it's very well done. Even the third chapter, which isn't as eloquent as your more recent work since it was written two years ago, still conveys the right feelings and has many creative gems. You wouldn't even have to revise it unless you really wanted to. You've improved a lot as a writer over the past two years though. I've read a few funny farm fics but yours really stands out. It's serious but doesn't get bogged down in angst. It has strong structure, it's engaging, and I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.

I want to read the rest so bad. I can't even sincerely tell you to take your time, that I know life is busy and just update when you have a chance. Cuz I want to read the rest RIGHT NOW. This beginning was so good *sniffle* but then you just left me hanging (like with "The Center Ring" *cough*).

I'll be happy to see any updated/new work from you =) Thank you for what you've written so far. You're very talented, so don't doubt yourself! I can't wait to comment on a next chapter~

ooooooooohhhh hehehe ooooooooooohhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats to much awsomeness for me to handle post more omg garra is still a sexy pants!!!!

omg its been so long in between updates.
this story is TOO GOOD!!!

please update soon.

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*

You know, considering how the psychologically damaged Naruto plot is so overused, you've done a simply fantastic job. I really did enjoy reading this. You're developing the characters at a steady pace, keeping just enough information away from the readers as to make us want to keep coming back, and using descriptive language that is informative, not over the top. I can't wait to see more of this fic when next you update.

omg I LIKE this, Sasu is soooooooo living in Egypt, along the river DeNILE lol, ok bad joke, but alas, he is, he is as looney as they all are, cause he thinks Itachi has gotten to all these people just to torment him and from what I am guessing, Itachi is already dead isnt he??? but Sasu hears him, sees him and expects to see him coming after him??? tsk tsk he reawlly is in denile, and poor Naru, not to be hugged??? awwwwwwwwww and I thought he would CRAVE contact, he is such a loveable person and I can sooo see Gaara and Naru having this mind sort of link to each other, it is sooo them, well I cant wait to read more, ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

The death glare numbering has to be the funniest thing ever! That made me crack up so hard. I love how you played out Sasuke's paranoia, his thoughts were dead on. And Jiraya with young Naruto.....wow...heartbreaking.

The chars are as IC as an AU story can be and I know how hard that is. I'm really looking forward to watching this one develop and I think you'll do it well without it becoming too cliche. Don't bother yourself with the other 'mental ward' stories. The only thing to be concerned about is writing one that's unique in it's field. (which this one seems to be so no worries)

I'm very intrigued. Your characters seem very deep. Can't wait to figure them out. Loving how Sasuke is hating everybody. Your writing is really good.

Please update soon!

sOoOoOoOoOoOo...~!
what happens next, hunny bunny?
O.O

I don't usually like this type of AU, but I've enjoyed reading this. Your description and plot development is believable and enjoyable. I'm look forward to more.

Interesting. Very original storyline.
update!