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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa...! forceful Sakura... and helpless Naruto... damn...! this is really hot, keep it up!
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was frickin hot. though i do kind of feel bad
for naruto (though i dont know why).
update soon please.
=^.^=
for naruto (though i dont know why).
update soon please.
=^.^=
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, still very kinky, and I'm glad it's NaruSaku! Once again, sorry for being repeatitive.....
Hopefully the story finally ends in the next chapter, and I've read a story with an obsession with ears, so the seal isn't that weird.....
Update soon!
Hopefully the story finally ends in the next chapter, and I've read a story with an obsession with ears, so the seal isn't that weird.....
Update soon!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you mean meanie. xD How could you stop at the best part?! xD I love how Sakura decided to spice things up a bit with him--tee hee, really amusing. And I can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve for the smut because you definitely have me interested! Your style is definitely very nice to read and I can't wait for an update! ^^
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the sexiest het Naruto fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. If there's no finish I'll probably cry lol
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Well, while not normally much of a fan of the Naruto/Sakura pairing, I have to say I like where this is going. The little bit of plot there was to keep it from being purely porn was entertaining. Also, oddly enough, I have no complaints about spelling, sentence structure, or other screw-ups most people make either by not caring or not giving enough of a shit to proof-read--the occasional oversight being the overlooked exception. My only qualm is that it was too short. I like my fic to entertain for hours--days, weeks even--as opposed to minutes. I would like to see more, soon.
Well, while not normally much of a fan of the Naruto/Sakura pairing, I have to say I like where this is going. The little bit of plot there was to keep it from being purely porn was entertaining. Also, oddly enough, I have no complaints about spelling, sentence structure, or other screw-ups most people make either by not caring or not giving enough of a shit to proof-read--the occasional oversight being the overlooked exception. My only qualm is that it was too short. I like my fic to entertain for hours--days, weeks even--as opposed to minutes. I would like to see more, soon.
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, this is a great story. please, please continue, as if you life depended on it
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Duuuude, so hot. And you got the characters, especially Naruto, so IC. PLEASE put a second chapter in!
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Kinky.......
I'm glad it's strict NaruSaku! (Name is an obvious give away) Although, I wonder if Sakura actually likes Naruto or is just using him, either way, it's going to get very steamy in the next chapter..... That's all I can say really.....
I'm glad it's strict NaruSaku! (Name is an obvious give away) Although, I wonder if Sakura actually likes Naruto or is just using him, either way, it's going to get very steamy in the next chapter..... That's all I can say really.....
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah! that was too good. I can't wait to read more.
Rox
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