rate_review Reviews

Excellent! Really truly excellent! Much better than the original. The way you had Sasuke stay instead of leave was so sweet and the lemon...helloooooo hotness, and nosebleeds of course. Perfect way to end OVCAM *huggles you*

"You stood no chance against the powerful Uchiha tongue." What's that? Sharingan-like mouth? That's new. I knew the Uchiha clan was gifted, but I really had no Idea just how gifted.

That was a wonderful re-write! Oh that was so sexy with the roses and the candles. I had goosebumps! Awww thank you for this hun it was so sweet of you. Its a wonderful gift and I hope to get my laptop fixed soon so I may return a favor. Wonderful job once again love.

Hehe, this was really good love. I'm glad that you spent some more time working on it, the third chapter turned out great! ^^

Yes dear I can tell your mad at me. As you should be....though I wrote you an e-mail explaining things to you, and just so we're clear.



I'm Sorry.



I'm really really sorry.

WAS WONDERING WHEN THIS ONE WOULD UPDATE.GLAD IT DID AND FINISHED TOO,I MUSTA MISSED SOMETHING BECAUSE I DONT REMEMBER KYUUBI AT ALL ILL REREAD IT IN A BIT MAYBE AFTER THIS REVIEW OR AFTER MY PROJECTS ARE THROUGH.CANT WAIT FOR SOME OF YOUR NEW STORIES

hope you will not consider this as a mean review, but you asked 'waddaya think' or something like that;

I think you got bored by this story and cosed it hurriedly. and it's a pity because the first two chapters were very good. but I didn't like the way you rushed this last chapter. In a couple of pages sasuke went away, naruto realized he loved him, then came back to sasuke with no clothes but a jacket on and they had their first time with the 'I love you' part too.

nobody is forcing you to update soon, wait until you have some more inspiration and write a good ending for this story, for 'Of Video Cameras and Molestations' deserves it.

hope you're not angry, bye

Hehe, I really liked the ending. I though it was cute when Naruto went and climbed in bed with Sasuke and that line "Naruto would always come back" or something like that... I thought that was so sweet! ^^

Cute - a little rushed at the end, but still cute. I liked when Naruto came to snuggle with Sasuke. :-)

~ Jelp

Yayy!!! wonderful yaoi waff!!!