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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Naruto can be a bit dense at times, maybe once they both have time to think about it they will be able to get together. Thanks for the update. Ja Ne.
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was great...even if i did deflate faster than a popped balloon at the end :(
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I loved this chapter! Naruto jumped Sasuke, that was so sweet! Too bad he backed out at the last second. I'm expecting some hot really hot smut in the next chapter!!!! hehe ^^
I can't wait to read the last part and if you still need help, then we can talk about it tomorrow. ^^
Sweet dreams love!
~Crimson2006
I can't wait to read the last part and if you still need help, then we can talk about it tomorrow. ^^
Sweet dreams love!
~Crimson2006
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i do not normally say bad things about naruto but what the fuck are you doing you cowardly dobe. sorry i had to get that out or my head would have exploded. please do not think of this as a flame in fact i really liked this chapter. i am not one for easy lays so this is in actuallity a very good chapter to me. i just couldn't take the let down. i felt really bad for sasuke. i can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my what a discovery! More please~~~~~~~~
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOUD THINK HED SEE THE LIGHT FROM THE CAMRA MOST HAVE A RED LIGHT WHEN THEIR ON,OH WELL HE WAS CAUGHT WHATS NARUTO GONNA DO
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool story can't wait for the next chapter
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is going to be fun! I hope Naruto rolls onto Sasuke when he comes to molest him and traps him in the bed! That would be funny. Or maybe Naruto could pretend to be asleep and moan out Sasuke's name and other stuff like 'god I wanna' fuck you Sasuke, you're so hot' when Sasuke touches him next time. I'll be looking forward to updates.
Cheers!
Cheers!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea! Nice! Can't wait to read more. ^^,
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Sorry I didn't get a chance to review this earlier. I really liked the first chapter. I think this is my favorite of your stories so far! Please update again soon!!!!! ~ Jelp