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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IT HAS BEEN 3 DAYS!!!ithink...ANY WAY ITS BEEN A WHILE !!!!! ADD THE 2ND CHAPTER!!!
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a Cliffy you sadistic sadist you OMG it was so hot and im like ooo next chapter but then it was -NOOO MUWHAHAHAHA!!!! you must wait....*sharingan* i will make you spend 12 years in hell w/ my powers if you don't update this soon...
GREAT story well worded and VERY SEXY!!! UCHIACEST!!! 0_o
GREAT story well worded and VERY SEXY!!! UCHIACEST!!! 0_o
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Horny!Kisame made me laugh >u< It's sad to see Sasuke so broken- but I guess if he had been taken into that world right after seeing his family slaughtered, you'd see him end up pretty much like this: resigned to having his body fucked and fondled and used on a daily basis. Makes me want to write my own SasuWhore story!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"His hand reached His back arched slightly as his abs petruded from his positioning."
You know, I think that's one of the hottest things a guy can do and yet no one ever includes it in fanfiction!
Kudo's to you!
I'm looking foward to the next chapter. :]
You know, I think that's one of the hottest things a guy can do and yet no one ever includes it in fanfiction!
Kudo's to you!
I'm looking foward to the next chapter. :]
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow such brotherly love.... good start for a story tho.
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this one is a keeper too!
one thing though...you need to add more detail with the sex parts!
ok, you know what you need to do...update asap!
one thing though...you need to add more detail with the sex parts!
ok, you know what you need to do...update asap!
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.