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for My Sweet Master

by ramenbandit

schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter and so quick too. i have to thank you for that because i think naruto is so cute. also yeah for more sakura bashing. i think it's so funny if a guuy would hide when he saw me coming trust me pride alone would have made me leave but to stand there and call out for him she got what she deserved. i hope naruto bites her on her big forehead (hint). can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww kawaii naruto is so cute can't wait for the next chapter
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it keep it comming please
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute. I like how you are describing Naruto as such a fluffy cute fox. I hope you update soon.
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!!!!!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a really good first chapter. mild sakura bashing is appreciated. naruto is so cute. will sasuke train naruto to use in battle or was he just saying that to get rid of the pest (sakura). will you explain later on why naruto changes at night and is that something that is reversible. does it have anything to do with naruto's parents. is the fourth still going to be his father. will kuubyi have a role in this. is sasuke living alone because of itachi or did something else happen. i can't wait to see what happens next.
person Stacy
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so great!!
i just love a foxy naruto!
oh please update asap!!!!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story can't wait to read more.
=)
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Great first chapter!!! Please continue!!