rate_review Reviews

Im so sad to see you haven't continued with this story...it seemed like such a good beginning. I loved the character interactions and the flow, and I could tell it would lead into an interesting direction. I love threesome stories and team 7 in general. I was just going through some old stuff and found your story in a file, I had saved it so I could remember to come by and check to see if you would post more. So sad...there nothing here.

The char personalities are great, dead on with all of them. Please write more I like where this is going it will prolly turn out to be a great story when its all done. :) good job!

Well... you need to work on your grammar. You might want to try and find a beta for this story. Grammar means a lot for a fic. In order for it to be enjoyable, the reader must be able to understand what you're trying to get across. Aside from that I think you have a pretty good plot going for you. Though I must admit. I HATE sakura. Even though I hate that bitch though... a team seven thressome has always taken my fancy. Thats why I'm writing one. LOL Weird, right? Anyways, keep writing and keep on trying! But seriously take my adivce about trying to find a beat!

--- GOTD

Update soon. I'm enjoying the story so far

i really love this idea and i cant wait till you update.

Seems nice :) Keep it up please

Just got done with the first chapter. Plot is pretty good and I'm looking forward to seeing where it's going to go. You do, however need to work on your spelling and punctuation. You may want to find a beta for the next fic you write. Otherwise, I'm liking it.

EF