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for Letting Go

by MoveThemHands

schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! why didn't you finish!!!! wow i would love to read this!!! you can even email it to me or something i really really like it omy gosh!!!!! sigh i wish i could write like that
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NEED MORE!!!! You can't just leave it like that!!!
What will happen now that Naruto will be the guardian for his father????
ur doing a terrific job!!!

keep up the good work. update as soon as possible!!!
Yane
person Turacy Nage
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome so far. hope you update eventually. I would like to see how it all ends.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh come on, no incest! lol no thats cool, i mean i like incest but i know this story is more a family story. please no naru/sasu god i will gp crazy i hate that pairing and only like it if the fic is really good.
anyways update soon
bye
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon.
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, hope you update soon. Oh and thanks for sending me the link.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O *eeps at the YOU!!!!* Hehehe I am not sure whether to run off with my Menma plushie or thank you for using him. LOL the only reason I started writing ANY stories was because I couldn't find any stories with him in it. But I look forward to seeing him in your stories. He is such a sweety. I really am getting into this story. It feels like there is gonna be some depth and turmoil in it. I can't wait to find out what else happens especially with all 3 relationships with Naruto. Will his foster parents ever make their way back in his heart. How is his father still so messed up must have been a bad trip. Well I will be looking for your update. Sadly my next fic won't have Menma in it unless I figure out a way to slip him in. It was a requested one but I feel so much better knowing someone is out there OTHER than me supporting MENMA!!! Ja!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no need to worry if i made it through hig school with out needing rehab then this is fine please continue to write this fic is turning out to be very well written and plays out to be more a real life fic instead of a jutsu filled storyline fic as always please continue to write and plz update soon
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a shame that Jiraiya and Tsunade treated Minato and Naruto that way. But that is what they get for their rash decisions. How sweet that father and son are together for the first time.

This is such a good story. Will there be any other characters joining the story or is it mostly going to be just about Naruto's and Minato's relationship? And will Naruto forgive Jiraiya and Tsunade? I guess I can be patient and wait for that question to be answered. But still that is something that if it is to be forgiven will take lots of time to heal first.

Great job and I am most definitely looking forward to your next review.
person Kurai Kisu
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I am at work when I do those anon reviews like I am not so I get too nervous to sign in. But I am up here matter fact I am gonna be putting up a new fic in a lil while. I don't want to plug myself so I'm not sure what to say for you to find me other than an author search. Sorry to have inconvienced you like that. But I am very happy that you updated so soon. Please keep up the great work!