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for Letting Go

by MoveThemHands

person darktoy
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH**!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 I loved it!!!! Tsunade and Jiraiya... I though they were smarter than that...

POOR MINATO!!!!!!! POOR NARUTO!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!! WERE ARE NARUTO'S FRIENDS???!!!!!

this is going to be (in lack of better words) Troublesome!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thnx for the shout out. Again this story has me throughly hooked i can't wait to see what happens as naru-chan comes to grips with his real dad in his life no instead of the pervy sage and granny tsu. as before please update soon i just hope this story does not turn into another naru/sasu fic thier r too many of them
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good first chapter. How exactly is Jiraya and Tsunade related to Naruto aside from having adopted him? Was his real father a family friend or relative and when he turned to drugs they took Naruto in and adopted him?

Lots to be looking forward to in the coming chapters. I look forward to reading your next update.
person Kurai Kisu
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is kinda deep here. Got me curious as to what will happen and who else will be in the story. I thinks its gonna be kind of interesting to see those two build a relationship of course after Minato accepts or realizes hes got a kid. Update soon Please.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool story i like it alot so far. i found it funny that u pair granny tsunade and the pervy sage and naruto's "parents". i really am looking forward to the next chapter, so update soon.