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by LadyYasha

person me
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh... My... God.
This is just the best fucking story ever. I laughed myself off my chair in the end.
Congrats, my friend!

Fucking brilliant, HA!
person Tank
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Sakura snuffs Sasuke AND Naruto. Woah.
person jinE
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well damn. 0_o
person setsue
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm.... I've always been f the opinion that it's hard to dial the phone when your hand is missing all six fingers (i know, hehehe) and you happen to be frozen solid anyway.
Death is such a lame excuse...
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, i just figured out how to describe this! it's like edgar allen poe creepy. and i love him. i was thinking about this story this morning, and it brought to mind 'the tell-tale heart', and then the raven always comes to mind when poe's involved in my thought processes. then i thought of 'the cask of amantilla' (that is so misspelled), and i decided i had to leave a review to say this.
GREAT STORY!!~
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... dear god, i don't know what to say to this. uh... she's loco. muy, muy loco. that was creepy, and i don't know what else to say. good writing skills? yeah. there wasn't anything there slowing me down, like bad grammar or punctuation. nice and...creepy.~