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ooo that was good, a nice long 1st chapter, which is always nice, and it left so many things unanswered. i like the style, very noir era detective novel, i could almost hear the radio narrator in my head while i read it ^.^

i hope we get more soon, i am quite intrigued

I'm interested! Seems like it'll have everything I look for in a fic - plot, coherence, relatively unusual circumstances and (of course) SasuNaru. I'm not usually a massive fan of first person, but obviously it goes well with the Noir theme and you've pulled it off nicely. Looking forward to more! :D

I enjoyed how jaded Naruto was. It made his personality feel OOC now but everything will fit perfectly later on when more events occur. The tension and suspense between Sasuke and Naruto was palpable and beautifully expressed. I get chills thinking what will happen on their next meeting. I like your setup. It's refreshing to go noir. Much love~

sounds very interesting, cant wait for the next chapter ^_^