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for Moonlight Jutsu

by brook13baby13

schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this name much batter, can't wait to read more.
person Sigart
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The review you posted sounds interesting, however I'd recommend that you found someone who was really good at writing English to do it for you, as it's rather distracting from the story whenever you error. I assume English is your second language...?
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What will happen next?! Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who is this guy? I'm glad Sasuke found Naruto!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Stacy
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooooo not fair!!! to stop your there was so mean!! really, i'm not crying! awesome story....more please!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really begining to like this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter to get updated.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's happened? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I wonder what Sasuke will do now that he's discover Naruto? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story cant wait for chapter 3. if u could i'm writing a story called longing i have a beta and shes great but i would love if u could look over it . i be so appreciative well keep writing bye
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome plot... I'm looking forward to it playing out!