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for Moonlight Jutsu

by brook13baby13

schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cocky much?? Sauske is too tough! Keep it up.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
With a little more detail this could be a great story. I would read it.
person Kent
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this seems like a great story go for im an also a big fan of blood surrender i cant wait till u add another chapter
person lonelylulaby
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think this story is perfect. It's never been done before. At least I don't think so.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person bakacharm
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHAYO! i think this is a great idea for a story! if u need ne help with it...let me know. (^_^)
JA!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea... hehe will you continue this... please?
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story looks interesting. Please continue.
person animelover
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting concept ... hey, I say GO FOR IT!! Seems like you could get angst galore out of this little ditty. ;-)
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool idea
=)
person btTara
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This kind of reminds me of Swan lake except the swan is a monster! XD Sounds interesting.