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for Blonde Bartender

by MrzUchiha

schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaahh unhealthy amount of the word 'sexy' in this fic lol
person Nelly
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great story, building up nicely. Never thought someone would dump an Uchiha. hahah...Hope you update soon.
person seph
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok you know what this is just weird...i have never been afraid of the word sexy until know O.o. they are totally OOC and he didn't seem like sasuke at all waaaaah~ i'm amazed sasuke didn't even killed the guy for saying that word too many times. i know i would have!!!! they sound like drags not gay waaaah!
person SasUke28
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DON'T EVEN GET A THANK YOU AND THEN YOU COMPLAIN!WHAT THE HELL KIND OF SHYT IT THAT!ALSO I DIDN'T CHANGE IT TOO MUCH!I ONLY FIXED SOME PARTS THAT WERE CONFUSING CUZ I COULDN'T GET WHAT CHU WERE WRITING!

Love Ally
oh and btw UR WELCOME U UNGRATEFULL BITCH FOR MAKING SEEM LIKE A BAD PERSON!
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did u like it??!!
I kno i did lol j/p XD
soo got any tips any anything??

I have a tip for you. Try writing your comments in proper English from now on. Chatspeak, a.k.a. idiotspeak, is obnoxious and hard to decipher.
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter!! Please continue!!
person gaara89
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I hope you update soon!
person LadyWolf
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurry,,,,hurry!!!!n Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!