rate_review Reviews

You never finished!!! And it's such a great story!!! Though I would hate it if Sasuke was forced to really have sex with a customer so maybe it's better this way.

This is great. I'm a sucker for a Cinder-fella story. Will naru get to have his way she sas Kouya? And will naru be able to stand back and let 'her' do the job?

Good start
But why is Naruto weaker than Sasuke?
That is a old cliche, and totaly wrong.

Sasuke may have had a head start, because Naruto was sabotaged, but in sheer power and potential, Sasuke is an little lake, where Naruto is the wide sea.

This is pretty entertaining. I wouldn't have predicted the stuff with the mission. I thought they'd stick around Konoha and there would be trouble with Neji. But I'm surprised that they had sex so quickly, and as men. I can see the logic in wanting to get some experience because of the mission, but Sasuke is supposed to be having sex as a woman, so it would make more sense for him to give that form a test-run. (There's the hymen issue, him getting used to being penetrated, etc.)

I love this story! Please continue! it's been soooo long without an update!! I wanna know what happens next, please???

Holy crap, I loved it! I expected this story to follow the typical cliche plot devices and extreme MISUNDERSTANDINGS (o noe!) that plague most gender-swap fics. So I was pleasantly surprised when Kouya came and revealed herself. Gee, imagine that, Sasuke demonstrated his trust in Naruto! You'd think all those lovey dovey fics out there might do something as simple and sexy as allowing the strength of their bond to shine through like this one does.

I also really enjoy how Sasuke seems to rather obviously be the one with self-awareness of his crush on Naruto. I love it when Sasuke is a bossy bottom--uh, I mean, a man who knows what he wants. He strikes me as having been the one on top 'cuz it was his first time, and Naruto will flip him over and have his way with the boy once he catches on to the hang of it. Poor Naruto has always been a little slow on the uptake. X) The sex scene was great, very action packed and descriptive, while avoiding flowery euphemisms or spending too much attention on "magical feelings". *thumbs up* Great job!

Hmm, I can't help but point out Kouya will still have her hymen and surely that would be a give-away at a brothel. Naruto should take care of that for her in the morning. >:d I'm not really into het, but you do a nice job keeping Sasuke's character still his own, even when female, so I'd like to see a Naruto x Kouya scene. ♥ Anyway, this is good shit. Hope to see updates from you soon! :D

I totally loved it! I thought Sasuke would be Uke ... but there is tons of time! ^_^ You did a wonderful job on your first lemon! I offer praise for a great bang! ^O^ I'm so dirty >.<


Update soon!

Hi, love the story and this chapter. I think you did a good job. Most first times are not perfect and you put it just right, not horrible and not perfect. So again, great chapter.

wouldn't make more sense for Sasu to bottom or be a girl when they had sex sense thats what the mission calls for.

*holds a tissue to her nose* Well for being a tad bit insecure about your lemon, I'd say you did a damn good job with it! I really love this story, I was honestly surprised that they progressed so quickly, but even though I was surprised, it wasn't in a bad way at all. I enjoyed his story a lot I hope to see more of it soon. I think this idea you have is very good and I love the style of writing. Lol at first I didn't think it would be too good because, well honestly, the title isn't the best...but I fell in love with the plot, the style of writing, and now the lemon scene. I really do hope you update soon, but I don't at all blame you if it takes a while because life seems to have it's ways of interefering... and I think I mispelled that word, oh well. Anyway I enjoyed it very much and I'll be check out your other stories as well. Good luck with your schooling and hope everything goes well for you!
Ja Ne,
Revine