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(I review as I read.)
Chapter 1: Hmm, I’m curious as to what type of mission Sakura has been sent on.
I loved your AN saying “Guys are weird this way.” X) . . . I thought he hated veggies. . . . lol Yeah, they do rearrange the landscape. ^^ . . . Heh, that was funny. Naruto sneaks in and Sasuke says “I’m not feeding you.” X) . . . Curious. I liked the ending.

Chapter 2: Sick? Did those needles do something? Whoa, sexy description. . . . Ooh, the Sharingan’s been activated and he didn’t even notice? Boy. Kind of hard to not notice something that’s made for noticing things.
Naruto’s having bad dreams? Oh, guess not. . . . Wha? “Ramen left me?” ???? . . . I wonder what Naruto will find when he finds Sasuke.
Is that how you make onigiri? . . . “Cute?” Not the word you want to hint at with Sasuke, Naruto. ^^ . . . Yeah, Sasuke has a gift for looking hot. . . . Hee hee, I love this line: “I’m just curious, but how long do you plan on staring at me?” ^^
Oh my, are they going to give in to the temptation?? *_* . . . Yep, Sasuke’s sick. . . . That’s a great line: “As fascinating as this position may appear to you, usuratonkachi, I do have other things I would rather be doing.” XD . . . “Kono?” What’s that?

Chapter 3: What is wrong with him?
I wonder how close to the mark Kiba was when he said that.
“Who’s that?” Must be Sasuke. . . . A girl? Is that him?? . . . Heh. I’m a “bewitched member of the Uchiha Sasuke Fan Club” myself, but you can visit too, Naruto. (*bats eyelashes cornily*) . . . Their seventeen. I was wondering how old they were. . . . Ah, such is the difference in logic between animals and humans. . . . “Seventeen and still a virgin?” Who cares?! . . . “I do not think so?” Sounds . . . funny. . . . Oh, she’s not Sasuke. Damn.

Chapter 4: Aww, why’d you have to give that AN at the beginning? You just gave something away! D:
Boy, I’d love to see a picture of Sasuke like this. Fishing as a girl, I mean. . . . “That actually works,” XDD . . . Um, when that random person said “That kid sucks,” I thought it was a little early. No one should say that on the first go. . . . Whoops. Sasuke slipped. . . . Aw, he likes foxies. :heart: . . . That ending to the segment was really funny. ^^
Heheh, Neji’s checking “Kouya” out. XD . . . Whu-oh, does Neji have a thing for Sasuke?
Hey, I thought Sasuke said he didn’t like sweets. . . . HAHAHA! “K-Kyuubi. I-I think she likes me. What do I do?” . . . Sunset, eh? Hmm, I’m sensing some fairytales here. . . . Cute ending.

Chapter 5: Heh. I was right! At sunset, he’s himself again. . . . Whoa! That was a surprise! Heh, Naruto’s sitting on his bed. XD . . . And he’s lounging like he owns the place! XDD . . . Now he’s asleep? That was quick. It was “Sasuke! You’re alive!” Then *snooooorrrre*. What the heck.
Whoa. O.O Where did this scene come from? What was happening??
Uh-oh. I missed that. Sasuke has the fox in his room? Oh dear.
Tsunade doesn’t like Sasuke? Understandable, but that could be bad news for him.
Um, “It doesn’t concern you.” I think “None of your business” would’ve sounded better. (Sorry.) . . . Heheheh, “Don’t succumb to Sasuke’s spell.” XDD . . . OH JEEZ, SASUKE’S WATCHING THE IMAGES IN NARUTO’S HEAD!!! XDDDDDDDD . . . “Soon, Uchiha.” I wonder what Sasuke thinks about all this. I love his dry attitude. ^^ . . . Wha? How’d they get in that position?? . . . Have you (the author) read Asuka Kureru’s “Teamwork” series? Her website has more smaller stories, and one of them has a huge scene similar to this one of Naruto going through the other guys he knows, wondering who he’d be interested in. . . . Uh-oh, Sasuke’s gonna get jealous.
Oh! What did the Hokage say to him??

Purr... moar? *puppy eyes*
Really fun plot and all. ^_^
Wanna moar, wanna slash, wanna ----- *shuts up before getting hit*

thanks for clearing everything up!! this was the best chapter so far ( and no, not just because of the smut), hehe.. update soon~

Damn! Naruto finds a female Sasuke hotter and more erotic than just an unknown Sasuke in his female form. >:)


Hehehehehehe. Its like some weird Hana Montana scenario where he can get the best of both worlds. This is a really good story, btw. ^^ I love how you took the time to build up the relationship before jumping into the exposition. The plot line is excellent too. I simply loved Naruto's reaction to the discovery of Sasuke's identity. Can't wait for your next update! Keep up the good work.

Uh oh! Naruto knows! Can't wait to see what happens.

Well, what happens now that Naruto knows that Kouya is really Sasuke? And what will happen on their mission? Hurry with the next chatper!!!