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person susanna
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wondered how Sasuke would tell Naruto that he was Kouya. I thought of a very painful conversation, but you found a really good solution, Naruto coming up with the answer himself and thinking that Sasuke was using a henge.

(Btw - I have watched Shrek I some weeks ago... and now I am waiting for true love's true kiss to happen in your story - hopefully Sasuke won't be stuck in female form, as much as I like him as Kouya.)

My favorite sentence:

It’s not so bad being a woman.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Waiting not so patiently for your updates.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

I really must say, I love your writing style. Desriptive, detailed, in depth, and creative. Very well done.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, im really glad you updated. i enjoyed this chapter a lot. though i do have one suggestion. i know you consciously made the decision to write Kouya from a girls pov, but i think that it would be better to leave it as sasuke. because otherwise Kouya starts to turn into a whole other personality. when i read it, it seems a little - off. i dont know how else to explain it. its like Kouya is a different person but with sasuke's thoughts and characteristics.. if you want to make Kouya into a different character all together then i suppose you're doing the right thing, but if you want her just to be Sasuke in a girls body then the girls pov would be a mistake.
anyway, i hope what i said made sense.. otherwise just ignore it. lol. looking fwd to ure next chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Those two are idiots! Only Kyuubi knows what really going on and he's not telling. And would Naurto lie to Sasuke about seeing Neji when he's clearly not?! They are both bakas!! Awaiting the next chapter!!!
person susanna
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke as Kouya is adorable - so much frienlier than his normal self. And Sasuke jealous of Neji is adorable as well. Cannot wait to see how Naruto finds out - though I would like to read a bit more of jealous Naruto.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read all the chapters today and I like the story. I hope you can continue soon.
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter plez continue. this story is good.
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The date was awesome! Too bad Sasuke had to leave so soon? And Sasuke as a girl? That rocks! What about the dance? Will Naruto ask Kouya(Sasuke)to the dance and will Kouya(Sasuke)accept. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it. was. MADLY CUTE!!!!! I'm waiting very eagerly for the next chapter... (uhm, the idea of a cinderella-sasuke, female during the day and male during the night is strange, but I think I like it!)
bye!

hak