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person Kimra
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Sasuke's a girl. Hope he doesn't stay that way though. (and yes I'm just assuming this is the plot I could be wrong). :D
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Could this mysterious young lady be our Sasuke? And if so, how did he become a she? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Dragon7
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. well written, though you have some tense confusion here and there in the second chapter. apart from that, keep it up.. i cant wait to see whats wrong with sasuke..mwahahahaha .. yes i am a lil evil. update soon~
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seems interesting so far. Please continue.
person LadyWolf
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice, can't wait to read more!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the wheels of the plot have been put into motion. Good job so far. I like the inclusion of the little adages and proverbs, also the 'stoic with a touch of bastard' line. I like how you describe the change the Godaime made to Sakura from being weak and dependent. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Dragon7
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.