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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!!
I am riveted by this story!
I can't wait for more. Poor Iruka. Poor Kakashi. I wonder what would happen if Iruka used chakra on him?!
*whimper*
I can't wait for more.
I am riveted by this story!
I can't wait for more. Poor Iruka. Poor Kakashi. I wonder what would happen if Iruka used chakra on him?!
*whimper*
I can't wait for more.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice update! i'm glad iruka got to change kakashi's living conditions. he was damn lucky he didn't get any serious diseases from all that filth. cant wait to see how naru's progress is on his side. looking foward to your next update.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Outlook looking better, but for some reason I sense angst coming on... update soon! :D
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad, yet so touching... I'm really enjoying the story, even if this type of genre is not what I usually read. You've captured the emotions and images nicely. Giving just enough for the imagination but not so much to be gruesome. The plot and storyline is absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see more and how the story will turn out. Thank you~!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update. Iruka and Naruto seem to be making some progress. I hope Naruto finds the person who sold Kakashi.
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
short...but movement has been made!!! Ooooh!!
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goooooood. *rumbles* Sex is nice, but plot is better! And this is some excellent plot groundwork you have going. :3 I was really happy to see this update in the lists. ^^
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... so interesting! Please keep updating! I can't wait to see what happens and how it plays out. Do get well soon~!
-amnie
-amnie
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I really want to see how they get Kakashi out!!!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when I start reviewing at juuuuuust that right time... and I try to sneak under the wire, I try to type fast... but NO, I get caught in the Daily Moment of Downtime.
and still felt it worthwhile to stay up the extra forty-five minutes and leave a review. I've gotten hooked on this in one sitting... it's so sad, but so hot at the same time... and there's this constant "what happened before?" "what happens next?" desire going through me.
It seems right that the Bitch shuts up Naruto and Iruka the way he does. It's the best way that won't get him hit, by anyone... and well-meaning as they are, it hurts, obviously hurts to not know anything better but to... want to want something better.
Have fun at your convention! I look forward to more of this when you get it done.
and still felt it worthwhile to stay up the extra forty-five minutes and leave a review. I've gotten hooked on this in one sitting... it's so sad, but so hot at the same time... and there's this constant "what happened before?" "what happens next?" desire going through me.
It seems right that the Bitch shuts up Naruto and Iruka the way he does. It's the best way that won't get him hit, by anyone... and well-meaning as they are, it hurts, obviously hurts to not know anything better but to... want to want something better.
Have fun at your convention! I look forward to more of this when you get it done.