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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
duh dun duh! great chap as always. How ever will our heroines get out of this one? :-D
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good fight scene ^_^ One of my favorite parts of fanfics is seeing how the author handles the parallels between canon and their world. I like how you managed this one and look forward to the next.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice original character, most o the time they aint that great but this is very good!! email me when you update~! me email is deannathx@comcast.net
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate to just post reviews just for the sake of posting but I do really like your story :-) It is really unfortunate that it isn't getting shown the love it deserves, but you are at least getting hits :-)
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just stopped by to say that while the premise is a little odd, I started reading it to see how you would handle the parallels, the story is what keeps me here. I know you aren't getting much review love, but know that there are people out here reading who do appreciate your effort :-)
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol i read the summary and i immediately thought...kill bill ripoff. its not a flame, cuz i havent seen how the story is, but if theres gonna be some orochimaru snake thing/...no. just no. i liked kill bill. dont kill it please.
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o, also, "most strongest" (naruki, u might have the most strogest technique, but ...) isnt english. i know i dont talk like that when im reviewing, but urs is supposed to be a work of art.