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for Behind the Mask

by TeaLeaves

person oohshiny
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, interesting plotline. just 1 thing. not to be offensive or anything but you might want to get a beta, your spelling and grammer has a bit to be fixed up on. ALSO email me at deannathx@comcast.net when you update this plz ~^^~