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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This is one of the best oneshots I think I have ever read!! *Loves on you* Were you serious about there being more?? Cause I think my brain might overload in into absolute happiness if you were ♥. Seriously I loved everything about this! The violence of it, the fact that Sasuke was so freaking disfunctional he couldn't have a proper conversation with someone he was crushing on. Event he set up with the companies was really good. I think this would make an excellent chaptered story! I hope you do update it *hugs*
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning. I really liked the smut, can't wait to see Sasuke & Naruto's relationship develop.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm dropping my love for your story here too! ^^ *glomps*
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...that was seriously hot. And it left so much open for more...so please give us an update! Everyone needs to join together and send Orochimaru into bankruptcy!
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It definitely needs more. That was so hot!
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. I like your stories and am glad that you are still writting.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot story. Loved it wish you would continue it
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Guacamole! Naruto and Sasuke having sex = hot...having angry sex = hotter...having angry sex on a linen
covered table in a public restaurant = priceless! Well done my friend...i'd sure be very pleased to read more :D
covered table in a public restaurant = priceless! Well done my friend...i'd sure be very pleased to read more :D