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by AcaciaBrown

schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo ^.^

i really want itachi to steal naruto away now, because sasuke doesnt really want to want him enough yet. then again, that could just be me being horribly sadistic to sasuke, like usual. either way, i hope we get more soon, because that

was a cliffhanger o.o
person Valerie
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meowry wants an ItaNaru, but is fine with NaruSasu just as long as you continue this.
person gaara89
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this!!! its hot when naru's on top.... lol
person getayaoilover
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome, sasuke with a crush is super cute! can't wait for the next chapter
person Allys
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT, LOL, That was an amazing start!! Please write more, right now XD!! Never mind me take your time, Sasuke was hilarious, it was adorable, and Gaara too!! Here's hoping you update soon *hugs*
person Adi (just haven't signed in)
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAH! ok you get your official review here since I dragged you all the way to AFF XD I loved it, I loved how Naruto just kept babbling before he was kissed by Sasuke, I love Sasuke jumping him, I love the whole NaruSasuness of it all. NOW THAT I KNOW YOU CAN WRITE PORN YOU MUST ALWAYS WRITE PORN ALWAYS XD it was an amazing lemon, seriously, I love Naruto's teasing, flirting and cheekiness, and when he met Itachi “How is it that the two of you are so good looking?” *snickers* perfect. (a little sidenote, the italics went wrong somewhere you need to add in a "[/i]" (with the brackets being replaced with the arrowheads) to end the italics)

LOVE FOR THIS FIC! ASDFGHJKL;'# (yes I have a big head XD)
person Kimra
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like you. But I question your need to make a plot - who cares about plot? I like it how it is!
person Allys
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! You and the evil cliffies!!! That's 2 for 2 so far!! LOL, boy that was quick XD. But I understand the thought processes, LOL, and can see how Sasuke would think it would help to speed things up, LOL, and hje kept going on about Naruto being too slow, XD. As if meeting and fucking usually happen on the day ;). What would he have done if had to wait through a couple dates XD. LOL, and I think I adore your Itachi XD, LOL, *Glomps him and then skitters away from the gun* Heh XD. Do you have any more chapters stored up your sleeve? *crosses fingers and hopes* Thank you so much for the speediness XD, I'm already totally hooked. Update soon? ♥ Ja.
person roro237
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving it please don't stop!:) Sorry that was the yaoi fangirl in me:) I want to know what will Sasuke do about his feelings? How does Itachi play into this? I loved the back ground you did on Sasuke in the first chapter and the sassy sparkle back ground you gave Naruto to. Looking forward to more.