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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww i love it i can't wait for the next chapter and the part at the end great twist.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really cool can't wait to see what happens next. Ha Sasuke really stepped in it this time. teehee.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't going to read this story, but I'm glad I did. You've got a pretty interesting set up for the characters and while at first glance the story just seems like a random demon fuck-fest, there's more going on and a larger world add to it. I'm looking forward to your continuation of this story. I'd like to see where it goes. =^^=
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I liked this! This was so amazing I hope you continue this you have a real knack for making Naruto seme most can't pull that off have the time. ^^ I enjoyed the story maybe a little more teasing before the pouncing that's my only coment that is contructive critism, but you don't need to fallow it if that's not how you roll. Any questions you can IM at kaginuspet at yahoo.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked the surprise at the ending! :D
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah this is good...it's different from what i normally read...which i mean as a compliment :D
Different is a good thing, Variety is the spice of life and all that good stuff. Anywho..i would
really like to read more of this story. I like how they had tails lol they sound really cute/hot.
Different is a good thing, Variety is the spice of life and all that good stuff. Anywho..i would
really like to read more of this story. I like how they had tails lol they sound really cute/hot.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm intriguing!I'd definitely look forward to the next chapter!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really should put a NaruSasu warning. I can't stand reading stories where Sasuke is submissive (it just does not jive with canon-Sasuke to me at all) so I really like to be warned before I go into a story, and I know there are others that do too.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fun~!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter was hot and awesome!! Please continue!!