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by KeairaxSeiaa

person blisblop
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Horribly sad.Well done character piece however.
person qwerty
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love how you ended this. I always enjoy reading people's theories on why Itachi killed his entire clan except for Sasuke.
Great job!!!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the word complete. Nonononono! Make it a multi-chapter please. You wrote so well and hit it right on.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Talk about a real deep story. I Love IT!! Great Job!
person Aice
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is entirely different. It's awesome.
You painted Itachi really well... in his own class and different from the rest of the Uchiha.
He sees further and deeper. I really like this side of Itachi.. though a little scary.

I can see that his life has been the Uchiha instrument.

I wonder what he's going to do next?!
person LJV
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot! Update soon please!
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...god...that was truly awesome. Itachi is such a complicated and complex character. I absolutely love your portrayal of his 'ascent' into insanity. Very well written...a definite masterpiece!