rate_review Reviews

Hey, I like how this is starting out. Nice & detailed with the thoughts of Sasuke clearly planned out. I'm definately interested in seeing where this goes. And since I'm NOT this far in the anime it is new to me which is all to the good. : )

This is wonderfully written and a pleasure to read, keep up the good work!

I like how you keep the mechanics behind the manga and the anime in place while you write this...
From the chapter posted this could easily be part of an episode.

Please put up a new chapter soon!

-Kino

I'm very curious to see what happens. I'm also surprised you didn't list Sakura as a main character considering she's a member of team 7 turned team Kakashi and has always looked forward to Sasuke coming back. I would like to see a romance for them, however it seems very unlikely. The writing style is nice and kind of vague. I hope you update often, it draws one in.

Set-chan

It sounds as if you're going for a darker tale, which I like. I do see a possible Naru/Sasuke here...only after Naru gives him hell for leaving. If you have an email update list, please add me to it.