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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
um...you had me up to the point that kakashi pulls naruto over his knee & spanks him. since this is in the narutoverse that was really out of character & you hadn't established a touching kind of relationship that would include THAT kind of touching. that needs a lot more prep to be believable.
chap 2 is believable tho'... so on to check out chap 3!
chap 2 is believable tho'... so on to check out chap 3!
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the scene where kakashi was getting chased by tsunade and sakura...and when naruto told sakura to stop strangling lee...priceless. missed hearing the thoughts of the characters though...that's what makes the action more believable.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sweet story though I would have loved to see more of a kakashi/naruto hotness but its alright[anessavanella@aim.com]
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... this is an excellant story I love it, I could bring myself to stop reading it. I'm sad that it's comming to the end, it needs steamy sex XD But I look forward to the epilogue!
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
K, first I love it! Second, now you have another fangirl to get on your but to finish this. LOL *hugs* TTYL
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEH U BETTER BE RUNNIN'!Leaving me hangin! omg! That was awesome! I loved it! plz plz update soon![anessavanella@aim.com]
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NARUTO.... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! KILL THE FUCKING ELDERS!!!! plz update soon, i love all of ur stories
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Are you planning to write more? because I would love to read it.
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funny. I could have sworn I just reviewed this on some other site that shall remain nameless.
Oh well. It was good!
Oh well. It was good!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pounces and drags you out* YOU LEFT IT LIKE THIS?!!??!?!?!
Oh my gods..I love the development between Kakashi and Naruto. Can't believe the council did this!
MORE PLEASE!!!
Oh my gods..I love the development between Kakashi and Naruto. Can't believe the council did this!
MORE PLEASE!!!