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for Naruto Punishment

by devil

schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i can say it was interesting but here is a question will Naruto draft more slaves and what is going to happen to Konohamaru and if Naruto does draft more slaves i put up Shion (from the Shippuden movie) as one
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello... I would like to say that your story is really, really, and I mean it, really good. I think the way you have Naruto act is very exciting. Please keep up the great work and I hope you get your computer working soon. P.S. I was wondering when you might have Naruto do a Kage Bushin Orgy with the girls in one of your chapters?
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good history
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... thanks for coming back... and... whoa.... ao anybody can do a guest fic?.... cool... I'm seriously looking forward to more action so I hope you update soon... Whoa!!!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought Naruto had to give permission to Tsunade, Sakura, and others to touch his girls???? Does this mean he'll be punishing Sakura when he recovers????
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was definately a good chap found the whole role playing part interesting but i think that Hinata's role would be to dominate for her genral but it works out very well in the end
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So... whose birthdays was it???? I liked the chapter, very nice and it totally made up for the last one!!!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i certainly love this story and how its going about the only i would ask to have included is Shion (from shippuuden movie) being Naruto's slave other then that i am good but ya i love how you went about everything hard to find good ones like this
person devil
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, could use a little more detail and stretched out a little more if you as me personally. The nipple ring was a nice idea and i'm glad people are taking up the chance to add a chapter to my fic, lord knows i'm having enough trouble writing my own.
hope you write a fic and place it in your name
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice