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awesome job keep it up

wow, talk about making it perfect to having a distraught broken tsunade to go crawling to Naruto, to beg him to look at her like that again, to be willing to give anything and everything including herself for another look and touch.
it would also be a perfect start point to teach hana who is top dog. it would be so funny to leave her inside the cage in her own apartment

Okay, will Ino get to experience the wonder of Naruko and Hinata both pleasuring her cock? I would also like to see Hinata as the filling in a blond sandwich with both lower holes nicely stuffed.

good chapter but not quite as good as you're others.
can you make hanabi naruto's third slave please.

Excellent work. Looks like Naruto taught Tsunade another thing about pleasure. I wonder, would it be possible for Hana to, when she wakes up, try to entice Naruto again and end up as his own slave? She did try to make an alliance with him, and Hinata is probably still upset at what has happened to her former sensei. Keep it coming

I am curious as to what. Punishment is going on between Tsunade and Naruto for Ino. I would like to see Tsunade,Hana,Anko and Naruto pairing. That would be a very interesting chapter to read... 3 dominators and one some what of a dominatrix/submissive

loving the story so far. anyway to get temari into the fun? maybe tsunade misses ino and asks suna for some kind of good will package or something and temari is sent.

Man, Hana is pretty hardcore. Excellent chapter!

I can't wait to see what Tsunade has planned. I always pictured Anko as a mistress instead of a slave, seeing her as a higher up slave able to boss the other slaves around is an interesting contrast. If you're taking requests.... I'd like to see Naruko taking in Ino's dick while eating Hinata out.

mrow... i like how hana hadles her girls its really new, i guess she into doggie play. When i fist saw this fic i was a little iff about reading it b/c i'm not a naru/hina lover but now i'm addicted. you write well and this is really my kink i love d/s fics. i'm happy to say this is a damn good d/s fic, it seems like ever since estia every one puts d/s in the label and very few deliver tastefully done and creative stories, you happen to be one of those few so keep up the great work and i look forward to the next chapter. oh and i also have a request if it's not too much trouble to ask. i want to know if you can somehow put the sand sibs with a nice incest twist (T/G T/K) in whiich temari is the master, that ive yet to see and really would like to.

thanks
inigeshi---