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for Spring Cleaning

by Glenndolyn

schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA, I can just picture how pissed off Kakashi and asuma must have been when Naruto closed the shade LOL
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Spring Cleaning' is definitely my favorite of your four seasonal Naru/Iru fics (just because of how perfectly a brat Naruto is in it). I laughed out loud (literally) when Naruto closed the curtains on the others. Wonderful.
person Ana
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"And if they kept stealing his ramen coupons he was going to tell on them. See how well they liked it when Iruka-sensei knew about their little fetish." Hilarious. Your making me like this couple. ^.~
~Ana~
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great! naruto's so cruel. i loved it, it's just plain cute!~
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha ^^ thats awesome. :D
person Tiffany
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute and Funny!
person jbjewel
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the closing of the curtain!
person eve4mem
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great!! I always knew Naruto couldn't train with two of the biggest perves and not come out all innocent. And please like Iruka dosen't know what's going on. Everyone knows uke Iruka love the attention =P
person llyoung
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very funny. If I could watch Iruka clean then spring would be my favorite season too.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol! i loved the way naru took control of the situation. very nice work!