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for Breathe (into me)

by ExitHere

person ShadouRyoushi (Not registered on AdultFanFic yet)
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'm hangin' around for the next chapter XD

Oh, and I'm interesed in becoming you're Beta (E-mail me the chapter/ comment if you're interested X3)

Keep up the good work! *Thumbs up*
person puppydog
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going.
person Julia
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, really really good. i have been looking for a good fic since perception ended and this looks quite promising. Jo
person Amysama
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start. It's hard to write in canon while things are still unresolved, but it seems as if this is going to be there. As for a beta, I only noticed a few things, word usage and maybe a run-on. But still a nice piece of work. Keep going and I'll be back to check on ya! Ganbette!
person Ebil Chameleon
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start. I can't wait to see how it developes. GaaSaku is one of my all time favorite pairings! I'll be waiting for an update for you!

Ja!
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd offer to beta, but I'm swamped as it is! Well, I REALLY wasn't expecting this to be as good as it was. So... good job! I can't wait for more!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed. I really didn't think it was going to be this good, for some reason. Update soon, I'm realling looking forward to this story.
person Todesengal
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd be more than willing to beta for you. I need something to do other than mope around and write.

I'm interested so far, not much else to say at this point. It would be prudent, however, for you to continue, plz. Kthxbai.