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OH SNAP!! your stories are legend! update soon like Konan and Akari!

great so far, are you going to write about other Naruto females? Like ramen girl, tsunami, yuki, and maybe other female chars in the anime?

wow the yugito fic was the best narutoxyugito fic out currently i believe

Since this was mentioned first, I think that you should just leave Gaara the same. I wouldn't put it past the Yondamie Kazekage to pass Gaara off as a boy, because lord knows a female weapon would be seen as weak (which we all know is bull). I have to admit that I'm quite curious about how you plan on pulling off the ones with Naruto x his mom and his sister, the crossovers, and the Hanabi and Hinata one. For the Biju poll, I vote for Hachibi (why not let him have at the two most powerful biju, it makes one hell of a statement). As for the other animes/video games, what about DBZ (as there are lots of ladies to chose from), Full Metal Alchemist (same reason), and Finat Fantasy XII (See how Naruto handles Ashe, Penelo, or Fran).

I love this series so far (although the first chapter confused me at times, and the second was very sad), but this is the best one so far. Killing off Hebi, Pein and Konan (possibly the two strongest embers of Akatsuki, though we don't know much about Tobi) all at once was funny. I'm sure the Konan one will be awesome, especially if it involves Pein being confused about Konan and Naruto being together. Any who, love how this one ended, but felt kinda bad about all the people that got offed. I must say that I am curious about who ended up with who.

Yo... DAMN good story and chapter so far. I love it tons and you sooooooooooooooo rock. I didn't really like Naruto die in the Haku one but it turned out ok I guess. Keep up the awsome work and I can't wait for the Kushina one. Those are just awsome. Your not the first one to do a mother thing but you will be the first to do Kushina actually. I look forward to that one emencly.

A possible story.... hemmmm.... I'd have to say Tsume. I have NEVER seen that done before. If you don't know who that is, it's Kiba's mom and Hana's mom. That has NEVER been done done before. EVER!!!! I would love to see that happen. You'd be the first yet again. Just a suggestion though.

Keep up the awsome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well this was an enjoyable chapter and how you portrayed Kyuubi was nice. The only question I would have
concerning your story would be exactly who died. Was it only Kakashi, Yamato, and Sai who died at Madara's
hands or did the others die as well? That's my only question concerning this chapter since it seems people are
confused a bit about it as well. Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.

Well that was interesting not much else to say really so keep it up.

Not trying to knock your stories or anything. I am just a little confused how you can have a hard time envisioning Naruto with the two females Kishi has set to be possible relationships for him in cannon. Yet you have no problem pairing him with characters we know practically nothing about including his own mother?

I would just like to say i like your fics. I kinda hope that the hinata and sakura fics turn out ok most people for some reson dont like them. Just to snub them you could have a naruto sakura hinata threesome. I however have an idea for somone who would be perfect for naruto, how about Kagome from inuyasha?

Another great story to the collection...

Damn, did you have a bad day? i don't think i've ever read a non Evil!Naruto story with as many
character deaths in it, as this one. But hey i still loved it, refreshing.

It seemed a bit rushed at the ending, 'well you slept and Madara killed everybody'. But of course,
it is a lemon, not a story.

Looking forward to the next.

Se'irim