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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was good. I want to know what happened to the others that were there. And how did they all get killed with two Hyuuga's and a good number of excellent shinobis. I liked the story please update more... Josh
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent first chapter. Not only does the erotica work, but the story itself was very well done.
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter, if a little tragic. And just to let you know, it's KaRIN, not KaREN (lower case, not caps, of course).
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapters! I hope too see a Naruto/Akira incest! (I'm not a fan of incest, both anime,manga and reality but Naruto/sisterOC seems hotter then any pairing i know(in my opinion)
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i have a request how about you find away to do a lemon rayne from blood rayne and naruto
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far and I can't wait to see what is gonna happen next, but come on if your gonna do incest then why not big titted Tsunade. I mean save for the fact that Naruto is always blabbing it there is nothing on that woman that looks 53 unless she uses her full power and how many times has that actually happened.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you will update all of your stories again soon. Thanks.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I've noticed you've had Naruto impregnate both girls so far. Will this continue to be a trend? Update soon.