rate_review Reviews

While both chapters were good, the first is better. I can't explain why, but it just is. If I recall, you mentioned at the top of CH2 about making CH1 into a story if you got enough reviews. If so, consider this a review for that. It was brilliantly done.

2. Haku

man, i have never reviewed a story in this site, and let me tell you that the haku chapter was awsome, lemon aside, naruto's death was something i didnt see coming. i thought that he was gonna survive.

couple of questions though,
when naruto saw 'the tunnel' that allowed him to take the rakiri instead of haku, was that hirashin?
it appears that when 'arashi' was conceived, most of the kyuubi chakra was transfered to haku through the child, correct?

lol

I have a question I know Kushuna is Naruto`s actual mother`s name but her is my question this Akira is she somebody you made up to be his sister or did they make it offical that Naruto does have a sister that is named Akira
that is all I am wondering about could yo e-mail me and let me know
other than that your fic is really good

Yet another great chapter/story.

Well, for ideas:
Rin
Fem!Sasuke
Fem!Gaara (Don't think any exists, but it could be good)
Uchiha Mikoto

Looking forward to the next.

Se'irim

good very good ad isaribi sasame inoue orihime (bleach) and hinamori momo (bleach)

Awesome chapter a little too much angst though but whatever still awesome There were alot of little spelling mistakes but nothing big Oh and incase you don't know it's rumored that Rukobi is a brown haired six tailed badger Also will you be updating this weekly or monthly?

I think your one-shots are very good and enjoy reading them. It seems to me you are kinda doing the same thing Demon God of Chaos did with all his one-shots but in my opinion yours have so far been better since you have a better story to go with your lemons than DGoC did. I am not trying to badmouth DGoC because I think he does great lemons but I think he needs to build on the story aspect to back up the lemons. Anyways, my vote for the other biju in the Naruto/Kyuubi/? pairing is for Nibi. I would also like to request a Naruto/Rangiku pairing since she is kinda like the bleach version of Kurenai as far as looks go (what I mean is they are both hot looking with a good sized chest). I really look forward to the Naruto/Yoruichi one-shot since Yoruichi is my favorite female bleach character. I don't know how into the bleach anime or manga you are but if you could do a Naruto/that woman who shot Ichigo and the rest of his rescue group into the shinigami city during the Rukia retrival arc using that huge ass cannon, that would be great. She wore the red dress, had short hair, kinda seemed a little like the bleach version of Anko in personality. I remember that she had a brother that went with them who ran away from any fight if he could (I really hate that I can't think of her name).

Awesome story. I can't wait for more. You should consider doing these ......

Naruto/Sakura/Sakura's mom

Naruto/Sakura/fem.Kakashi/fem.Sasuke

and

Naruto/femGaara/Temari

I know there is alot of gender bendes, but those are lemon i've been wanting to see for awhile.

Looking forward to the next chaptr with Kushina

Yo!!!!!!!!!! Loved the one shot. Truly a work of art!!!