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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to review other one so just did that. Now this one that I just read and finished. YOu are so awsome!!!! You so rock. One person I would say to add on the list would be Rin. She so hot damn!!!!
Then the way this one ended with Naruto deing, was s sad but ok I guess. Loved the thing still.
Then the way this one ended with Naruto deing, was s sad but ok I guess. Loved the thing still.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter,really unexpected to see Naruto protect Haku like that and her getting some of Kyuubi's powers and kill Gato like that.
Great chapter,and yes put Isaribi,Sasame,Princess Yukie,hell almost every girl from the filers and movies(add the antagonists too!)...I'm a bigger pervert that Jiraiya...WOO HOO!
Great chapter,and yes put Isaribi,Sasame,Princess Yukie,hell almost every girl from the filers and movies(add the antagonists too!)...I'm a bigger pervert that Jiraiya...WOO HOO!
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this was a nice chapter as well as the one before. To be honest I'm a Naruto x Hinata fan, but there are two other people that I can see being with him (one more recently then the other). Those two are a female Haku and Yugito (sorry others don't strike me as connecting as well with him). Now before you mention Hinata being in a clan and having her family (like one person did in a review on FF.net), they never treated her that well since she didn't measure up to their expectations (and the whole prestige from being a Hyuuga, wouldn't act as a positive reinforcement due to being told she's a failure by other Hyuuga's including her father).
Sorry for that little rant bit on Hinata. As for adding in other people, I say to put in Yukie and lets see what your mind comes up with. A request on some more two girl chapters are one with Haku and Hinata, and one with Yugito and Hinata (if I'm lucky I might get this since you like both Haku and Yugito or you could just do one that is all three but that goes against what you've said in your author's notes).
Keep up the good work and hope to read more soon.
Sorry for that little rant bit on Hinata. As for adding in other people, I say to put in Yukie and lets see what your mind comes up with. A request on some more two girl chapters are one with Haku and Hinata, and one with Yugito and Hinata (if I'm lucky I might get this since you like both Haku and Yugito or you could just do one that is all three but that goes against what you've said in your author's notes).
Keep up the good work and hope to read more soon.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm that was pretty good wasn't especting a full fledge story behind it but oh well though i am wondering why you would have a hard time seeing him with Hinata then again i guess its a point of view though i can agree with you and Sakura she is the only one on the list that i can't see Naruto ever getting with well besides most of the demons but i can't get a good idea of what they look like as girls so ya well keep it up i guess you can always ask for help on what to do for Hinata.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh ya one more thing if you do a Naruto/Hinata/Hanabi threesome i would like that been looking for like that oh and one with the new female character from the 4th movie (you will have look up stuff on that)
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far... Little spelling and grammar errors here and there but otherwise good... I lol'd at the cat and blender thing... I have an aunt who has a cat and the cat likes to jump and climb stuff. Since my aunt is a pastry chef, she has this mixer/blender thing and one day she got a picture of the cat inside the blender that looked so adorable (the cat was fine btw)... Anyway, hope you update soon and a request for Kushina & Konan (danger and incest ... what fun!). Keep up the good work...
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved the chapter/oneshot, it was all cute and cuddly and fairly well written so i applaud you on that one. By the way i looked down the list, and i didn't noticed Hana Inuzuka(If i spelled it right.) name on the list. it's almost no fanfic's of her and naruto, and if every chapter is like this one i know you will make a good one. until next time. ja ne.
Peace & Love BastardOmega
Peace & Love BastardOmega
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems cool ^^ I wanna read more. I like how your doing a Shitload of chapters each a one shot.
I'm also wondering....what about Naruto's Sexy Jutsu? Could that be considered a story? or is that to weird and different?
I'm also wondering....what about Naruto's Sexy Jutsu? Could that be considered a story? or is that to weird and different?
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WUUUOOHH!! Your Style is great, keep on!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great ass chapter right there.But I thought something was gonna happen to Yugito like have the Bijuu extracted from her and Naruto goes to the Akatsuki lair and kill them all,before dieing himself..thats what I would've done.But hey it's your story,and I like it.
You should try putting the Sexy-Jutsu Naruto...or any Character in a female form(though you gotta explain why they are boys,or you can make them be born and stayed as girls)like Fem.Sasuke,Fem.Itachi,etc.
But the incest part bugs me though,Kushina is probably dead because she was said in the past tense and having Naruto having sex with his twin sister...wow...wierd...but wow...yeah that could happen,like they meet,fall in love,have sex,then finally discover that they are twins.But they'll ignore that and still have sex.
Shit I think I'm giving you ideas,ahh fuck it you can use those ideas if you want.But if you do give me some fucking credit if you do.
Ja Ne,
You should try putting the Sexy-Jutsu Naruto...or any Character in a female form(though you gotta explain why they are boys,or you can make them be born and stayed as girls)like Fem.Sasuke,Fem.Itachi,etc.
But the incest part bugs me though,Kushina is probably dead because she was said in the past tense and having Naruto having sex with his twin sister...wow...wierd...but wow...yeah that could happen,like they meet,fall in love,have sex,then finally discover that they are twins.But they'll ignore that and still have sex.
Shit I think I'm giving you ideas,ahh fuck it you can use those ideas if you want.But if you do give me some fucking credit if you do.
Ja Ne,