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for The Naruto Chronicles

by Zagger

person Josh B
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the story that you started and I hope you make another chapter or make this into a story about Yugito and Naruto being a couple and who knows what can happen after that your choice I like how the story is.... Well the chapter to many chapters of other women....
person Se'irim
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this... I really like this.
To tell you the truth, i have read several projects (list of lemons), but this is the first time
that they actually have a story, and if you are planning on keeping this going, i can tell you that
it most likely will become the best list on AFF.

Keep up the good work.

Se'irim
person Syxx
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yo nice, very nice, but how can you forget about Tsunami? anyway looing forward for more
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it the characters are in character the emotions you had Naruto & Yugito go though made them seem like real people Also you never did say what rank Yugito was Gennin Chunnin Jonin Oh and the only spelling error i found was "Alright, just don't drip them." it should be drop My requests are Uchiha Mikoto (she's the hottest female Naruto character in opinion) Inuzuka Hana (Kiba sister) Shihouin Yoruichi (Bleach character) Kurotsuchi Nemu (Bleach character)
person adolthered
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! I must say that your story is magnificent ! Everything in your story as such as character, story's plot and Lemon scene is perfect. You made everything satisfied and complete in one chapter, GOOD JOB !. Keep up your magnificent piece of work. I will wait for next chapter. Good luck.