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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story sir.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your work but when might you update
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hay could yah send me a link to your FF page please.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are my hero!!!!!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I look foward to your crossovers. Challenging but interesting.
The 7-tails jin does strike me as a bit "wild."
The 7-tails jin does strike me as a bit "wild."
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You use began too much. You should work on that.
Keep it up though
Keep it up though
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one the best so far. Also, thought you might like to know, that Konan, Nagato, and Yahiko were older than Minato. Jiraiya actually came across them during the end of a war, before he took a Genin team, and stayed a few years in Rain training them. I think this might have been just after the Sannin got their title from Hanzo. According to databook three, their around 40, and would actually be between 2-5 years older than Minato would be.
NarutosBrat (fanfiction.net)
NarutosBrat (fanfiction.net)
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I love this story! Your lemons are really good, and the one shots actually have plot! One thing though: You have a DP warning in the summary, but I don't see any in the fic. Please put some in soon! Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can.
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great to have you back, dude, I was a little worried you weren't coming back. It's good to see you get back to this, and look forward to your stories on some of the girls, like Kushina, Moegi, Isaribi, Ayame, and Tsunami, since there's not enough written for them, and there's also not enough with Naruto and Kurenai. And after seeing how well you did with the Fem. Sasuke, I really would like to see how you do with Fem. Gaara, especially if it includes Temari and/or Shukaku.
Some people have some Ideas, like someone suggested Naruto/Tayuya/Kin/Karin (Naruto could be captured, they help him escape), and I'd like to see that.
I'd also like Naruto/Hinata/Ururu(BLEACH) (I like the quiet girls), Naruto/Mikoto/Fem. Sasuke (Family Fun), Naruto/Tsume Inuzuka (Juat because she's a hot, single MILF who is probably like a wild animal in bed), Naruto/Hana/Tsume (Pack alpha and his mates), Naruto/Nemu(BLEACH) (Maybe her freak father could get his ass kicked, and Naruto's the guy to do it), and Naryto/Yoruichi (Maybe include Kukaku Shiba).
Can't wait for your next Update.
Some people have some Ideas, like someone suggested Naruto/Tayuya/Kin/Karin (Naruto could be captured, they help him escape), and I'd like to see that.
I'd also like Naruto/Hinata/Ururu(BLEACH) (I like the quiet girls), Naruto/Mikoto/Fem. Sasuke (Family Fun), Naruto/Tsume Inuzuka (Juat because she's a hot, single MILF who is probably like a wild animal in bed), Naruto/Hana/Tsume (Pack alpha and his mates), Naruto/Nemu(BLEACH) (Maybe her freak father could get his ass kicked, and Naruto's the guy to do it), and Naryto/Yoruichi (Maybe include Kukaku Shiba).
Can't wait for your next Update.
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice really enjoyed this one, but not as much as the other one's. What I can't wait for is when you do the sound girls, Tayuya, Karin, and Kin. Prehaps you could do a chap with all the sound girls on Naruto? Not only would that be fucking sweet it would give me the nose bleed of the century! :)